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04-09-2004, 09:14 PM

ok i've written a new poem and i'm not too sure about so tell me what ya think--

Don’t look at me my skin is scarred
Yes I’ve had to discover that life is hard
Don’t look at me my body is bruised
I’ve been wasted, violated used and abused
Don’t look at me, my soul is screaming
It’s because of you that I’m sickened, bleeding
Don’t look at me howling on the bathroom floor
When did you ever stop to notice before?
Don’t look at me, my spirit is retching
What is it about life that makes it so tormenting?
Don’t look at me now my wretched life is leaving
Flying away like a faint feather on the wind
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04-10-2004, 08:33 PM

i really like it! definetly keep writing.


numbness is so exquisite
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04-11-2004, 12:29 AM

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OMG!!! I LOVED YOUR POEM


I can hardly breathe I need to feel you here with me.
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