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dragongirl653
02-11-2006, 06:01 PM
Ok here you go, part 2. Hope you like it!!!



As you look down you wish you would have listened
They don't try to hide the cuts
Everycair is full and there is not a dry eye to be seen

You never ment to hurt them, to make everyone cry
You just wanted to make all the pain go away
Now you have to dance a different dance

To never to be able to laugh
Or cry
To never be able to have a family
To never see what lie ahead

You stand there and try to move
You think you are but you're not

Family and friends carry the casket out
They just walk through you not even noticing you are there
You watch them leave

Every one drives away
You close your eyes
And wish you were with you family

When you open them you are at the plot
On you head stone it reads "our loving daughter"
You stand there as a tear rolles down your face

You fade like a fog that rolled in and right back out

German Suicide
02-11-2006, 06:50 PM
wow, deep, both of them are. part 1 and 2!

dragongirl653
02-11-2006, 06:52 PM
Thanks. I really only write about what i know and have expereanced. I think that is why i can write so deep and emotinal stuff.

missyli13
02-11-2006, 07:19 PM
just as amazing as i'd hoped
i feel like i'm in the poem itself feeling what they feel
its amazing beyond words
i could almost cry....

dragongirl653
02-11-2006, 07:22 PM
Don't cry!!!! Because then i will cry!!!!!!!!!! DON"T CRY!!!!!!!!! NO CRYING!!!!!!!!!! lol But thanks these are my 2 favorite poems i have written.

blue_and_unhappy
02-11-2006, 07:23 PM
DAMN.......that's all i can say,, that was really powerful!!!! You are very talented!!!!

~ Megan

dragongirl653
02-11-2006, 07:30 PM
No not really, I just write about what i know and have experenced. And thank you!!!!!!!

blue_and_unhappy
02-11-2006, 07:33 PM
Read those two poems again......what thought pops in your head......damn, she has talent....and those poems are a fine example of it!!

~ Megan

dragongirl653
02-11-2006, 07:38 PM
I know i get alot of that. But i think that it is because i wrote then that i think that.

blue_and_unhappy
02-11-2006, 07:42 PM
your are a great writer hunni!! keep up the great work!!

~ Megan

dragongirl653
02-11-2006, 07:43 PM
I will. I am thinking about posting more of my stuff. I don't know if i should though.

blue_and_unhappy
02-11-2006, 07:45 PM
Please do!!! Your poetry is amazing ......god i wish i could write like that!!!

dragongirl653
02-11-2006, 07:46 PM
You are a good writer. I will post more of my stuff soon.

blue_and_unhappy
02-11-2006, 07:48 PM
no sorry....you have the wrong person......

i can't wait to read it!!!

dragongirl653
02-11-2006, 07:50 PM
Ok i will post another one right now for you to read.

blue_and_unhappy
02-11-2006, 07:53 PM
cool beans......* claps hands in excitement *.......

German Suicide
02-11-2006, 07:58 PM
YAY! MORE POEMS! I love poems, and your are soooo good

dragongirl653
02-11-2006, 08:07 PM
I just pmed both of you and the new poem is A Careless Wisper.

windowstothesoul
02-12-2006, 01:36 PM
awesome! i dont think thats how i would feel when i die..but its really good! i cant wait to read more!