View Full Version : Cutting Can Kill (part 2)

02-11-2006, 06:01 PM
Ok here you go, part 2. Hope you like it!!!

As you look down you wish you would have listened
They don't try to hide the cuts
Everycair is full and there is not a dry eye to be seen

You never ment to hurt them, to make everyone cry
You just wanted to make all the pain go away
Now you have to dance a different dance

To never to be able to laugh
Or cry
To never be able to have a family
To never see what lie ahead

You stand there and try to move
You think you are but you're not

Family and friends carry the casket out
They just walk through you not even noticing you are there
You watch them leave

Every one drives away
You close your eyes
And wish you were with you family

When you open them you are at the plot
On you head stone it reads "our loving daughter"
You stand there as a tear rolles down your face

You fade like a fog that rolled in and right back out

German Suicide
02-11-2006, 06:50 PM
wow, deep, both of them are. part 1 and 2!

02-11-2006, 06:52 PM
Thanks. I really only write about what i know and have expereanced. I think that is why i can write so deep and emotinal stuff.

02-11-2006, 07:19 PM
just as amazing as i'd hoped
i feel like i'm in the poem itself feeling what they feel
its amazing beyond words
i could almost cry....

02-11-2006, 07:22 PM
Don't cry!!!! Because then i will cry!!!!!!!!!! DON"T CRY!!!!!!!!! NO CRYING!!!!!!!!!! lol But thanks these are my 2 favorite poems i have written.

02-11-2006, 07:23 PM
DAMN.......that's all i can say,, that was really powerful!!!! You are very talented!!!!

~ Megan

02-11-2006, 07:30 PM
No not really, I just write about what i know and have experenced. And thank you!!!!!!!

02-11-2006, 07:33 PM
Read those two poems again......what thought pops in your head......damn, she has talent....and those poems are a fine example of it!!

~ Megan

02-11-2006, 07:38 PM
I know i get alot of that. But i think that it is because i wrote then that i think that.

02-11-2006, 07:42 PM
your are a great writer hunni!! keep up the great work!!

~ Megan

02-11-2006, 07:43 PM
I will. I am thinking about posting more of my stuff. I don't know if i should though.

02-11-2006, 07:45 PM
Please do!!! Your poetry is amazing ......god i wish i could write like that!!!

02-11-2006, 07:46 PM
You are a good writer. I will post more of my stuff soon.

02-11-2006, 07:48 PM
no sorry....you have the wrong person......

i can't wait to read it!!!

02-11-2006, 07:50 PM
Ok i will post another one right now for you to read.

02-11-2006, 07:53 PM
cool beans......* claps hands in excitement *.......

German Suicide
02-11-2006, 07:58 PM
YAY! MORE POEMS! I love poems, and your are soooo good

02-11-2006, 08:07 PM
I just pmed both of you and the new poem is A Careless Wisper.

02-12-2006, 01:36 PM
awesome! i dont think thats how i would feel when i die..but its really good! i cant wait to read more!