View Full Version : someone else's victory

08-17-2005, 12:10 PM
i see a shell of a face
a body in pain
standing on the edge of nothing
she is a victory for her tormentors
i see someone else
a person i don't know
a mirror image of everyone else
she is a victory for normality
i see a drowning victim
running to non-existance
seeking to feel nothing
she is a victory for downfall
i see a bleeding wrist
wrapped up in unbreakable silence
something i can't hide
I am someone else's victory

this isn't my best, yet it's not my worst.i'm new here i normally post on poetry .com. forgive the ramblings. it's what i do

08-23-2005, 06:34 PM
I really liked this poem. Hmmmm someones elses victory, but who's?